Aspectry
  Junior Member

Ok thanks for the feedback

nice

Ithink the song is blue world by Mac Miller

I think your looking for Brimful of Asha made by Cornershop

dont mock eminem

umm...
i made it into a short song but i just need a name
sooo.....?
what name

Check out Aspectry
He's a good songwriter

It will work out fine when I finished this line
Me and cheria checked the time
And right now it's time to grind
But wait a minute
We need to find a hospital to finish
Roll in the Range Rover to the hospital
My man cheria got a knife in his(/her) back
"All sorted you ready to go cheria?"
"Alright bet"
Roll in the Range Rover
Cuz we,
Tryna find
The cash when we rob this bank
5 star ratings now them man be calling up a tank
6.24 with a suitcase full of shanks
Stab every one of them twice
It's like we rolled a dice
And got lucky
But some guy in a black suit comes in wearing a mask lookin' like mice
But me and cheria are too nice
So with the last 2 shanks we cut his neck open
After we done that the day was over...
10.49 it was game over time
They found my house and probably his(/her)
Bad for him who gon' feed his(/her) kids
Me and cheria go to jail
Fiddlin' with bottle lids
Goin' to jail
We got a big fail
The driver was as slow as a snail
Can't handle it so now we have to bail

Cheria.43734 if your out there lets turn this into a song? more »